Re: Morning Duties, (Closed)

[FellmoonX]

Fellmoon sat down and watched Frostheart, he waits for his answer. Gaves Barkfur a look that says he felt that he did not go too far, and that he said what had needed to be said.

[Goldenstorm]

ooc: hey fell, this rp site is in 1st person view, as in it's not "Barkfur sits down." it's "Barkfur sat down"

Barkfur waited for Frostheart's answer anxiously. Her tail was flicking back and forth hoping that he would agree with her.

[Member]

OOC: *coughCOUGHcough* Uh.... Golden. *cough* Ahem. That's third person view, which he's using right now. First person would be: "I watched Barfur sit down." So, technically, he's doing the right things since saying: "Fellmoon sees Barfur sit." I think what you mean to say is that when we RP we write in past-tense, while he rights in present-tense... or a mix pr past and present.

Though, it doesn't matter, as long as we know what he's saying.

[Wolvine]

Dewpaw watched the two tom-cats with growing interet and was dissapointed that Barkfur had intruded. Oh well, no chores today. That was a plus.

[Goldenstorm]

ooc: eh. fell should get the point. I an idiot when it comes to the view thing.

[Noname]

"Good, you can help him with his apprentice duties Barkfur. I expect those chores to be done soon. There is still plenty to do for the real warriors. Well, cheerio, off to do some pipping." said Frostheart walking away with a happy bounce in his step.

[FellmoonX]

"Barkfur", Fellmoon says staring toward Frostheart as he left, "Lets go hunting, also what do you think about us taking Dewpaw, this all started because he didn't have something to do."

[Goldenstorm]

Barkfur shook her head. "No, we should do as Frostheart said and do some apprentice duties. Dewpaw, stay out of trouble for now. After Fellmoon and I are done, I'll come and get you for some hunting." she mewed.

[FellmoonX]

"What", Fellmoon asks, "Do you agree with what he is doing"

[Goldenstorm]

"He's the deputy. Disagreeing with him would be like disagreeing with Silverstar. We have to listen." Barkfur sighed. She began padding to the elders den, at least she could hang out with some cats who were warriors before her. She looked over her shoulder to see if Fellmoon was following.

[FellmoonX]

A dark look passed over his face, "Fine, I'll go but I will describe the situation to Silverstar, when we are done."

[Goldenstorm]

Barkfur shrugged before continuing.

[Wolvine]

Dewpaw nodded and padded off. She was still a little embarassed about causing hte warirors so much trouble.

[FellmoonX]

Fellmoon sighs as he watched Dewpaw walk away. Fellmoon says to Barkfur, "It's really wasn't her fault, if she had been given to someone to work with and to keep her busy, none of this would have happened". Now that he has calmed down a bit, Fellmoon sees he could have handled it better and continues saying, "While we are at the elders den, I'll ask the elders what I should do and their advice."
ooc: I'm taking this to the Elders Den Forum. Does anyone know who plays the elders of Thunderclan?

[Wolvine]

OOC: Dewpaw is female and River had Treehunter the mad kitteh.

[FellmoonX]

ooc: Sorry fixed it, I don't know what I was thinking. It's continuing in Elders Den. I don't understand that last part, "River had Treehunter the mad kitteh"

[Wolvine]

OOC: River. She has a cat called Treehunter. He's a TC elder......

[Goldenstorm]

ooc: yeah, someone will post.

Barkfur nodded. "Why don't you see if you can mentor her? You can ask Silverstar after we're all done with our duties." she suggested, whisking her tail in the air.

[FellmoonX]

"Hmm, yes that may work, but would Silverstar agree with the idea, expecially if Silverstar may think I cause too much trouble", he asks Barkfur.
ooc: Please go to in Elders Den Morning Duties Continued (Open)

[Goldenstorm]

ok.

"She will, she trusts me. I hope." Barkfur smiled.

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