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Fellmoon wishes to join Thunderclan, has come a long way.

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Post by FellmoonX Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:47 pm

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Name: Fellmoon
Breed: Bengal cat.
Gender: Tom

Alliance: Thunderclan.
Rank: Warrior
Cat's Age: 7 seasons
Description: His fur is dark brown and spotted like a leopard; his eyes are a deep forest green. Even the bravest warrior seems to take a step back when they see his piercing gaze.
Personality: He is a strong, skilled warrior; he looks down on cats he feels don't show their best effort, yet he honors also those that earn his respect. He is extremely brave, even stubborn at times, but through and through he is loyal to his core, willing to put his life in the greatest of risk for his new clan. He is one of the most trusted cats in his clan; know for in all clans for keeping his promises, only his clan leader can command him to break his word.

History: No one knows for sure, not even his clan leader knows just what haunts his past. Yet many cats have felt an unease when he is around. Thunderclan's medicine cat, will tell the Thunderclan leader when Fellmoon joins that there is a darkness that follows him.
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Truth of the matter, he was found by a coven of rogues by the name of DarkClaw when just a kit, it was thought that he was an orphan. The leader of DarkClaw, Boneclaw, felt strongly that this kit had great potential, it was clear to all the kit was a fighter by how he resisted the cats from taking him to their territory. Boneclaw then spent a long and tireless duty of training Fellmoon to be his very best, he turned Fellmoon into a relentless killer that he taught everything he know too. Boneclaw raised Fellmoon to believe many lies, the one some might say the most potent was when he told Fellmoon that only he could be trusted, that he was the one who saved him from certain death. Fellmoon's training could in many ways be called a nightmare, yet it was extremely effective, no one could deny that he had become the best killer in DarkClaw. But this all changed when Fellmoon was given the mission to infiltrate a clan that happened to be in Boneclaw's way. Fellmoon could easily have completed his mission if one of the elder hadn't spoken to him first. Much was said, and the elder's words were wise yet hard as well. The elder's words pierced Fellmoon to his heart, and also opened his eyes to evil he had done. Fellmoon then saw the one he had looked up to and trusted, his leader Boneclaw, for who he truly was, a cruel and ambitious monster. Fellmoon decides he would stop this from going any farther, so he went to his leader's den, and killed Boneclaw before he could do anything. Fellmoon then runs, he was then chased down by the coven's very best, but he was better, yet even then he had just barely escaped with his life. Fellmoon from that moment on swore that he would never fight with the intent kill again, that unless the cat was truly evil or he had no other choice; he would always allow the cat to escape, because he never wanted to see blood of an incident cat on his claws again. After many moons of wondering, long travel, and meeting many cats, Fellmoon found himself at the border of the Clans' territory. After speaking with many cats, Fellmoon was able to hear of the deeds and ideals of Thunderclan, he then decides and there that he will join this clan know for its honor and fairness. When he was allowed to join the clan he swore an oath to serve and obey his clan leader to the point of his death and above the word of any other cat.

Picture: http://web.ukonline.co.uk/silversafari/silversafari/flash%20left%20hand%20side%20straight%20cropped.jpg


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Post by Wolvine Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:57 pm

A) There is already a Fell (Mah wolf =D) B) You can't make a loner that will join a clan after five posts anymore.
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Post by FellmoonX Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:05 pm

What would you suggest, mainly what I care about is that his name in clan will be Fellmoon? Also, do you have any way of allowing Fellmoon to keep his history and be able to join Thunderclan too?


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Post by Wolvine Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:45 pm

Eh he can be Fellmoon and he can have joined the clan. But that would mean you never RP him as a loner, only as a clancat.
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Post by FellmoonX Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:50 pm

That's fine. Thank You. I updated the History.


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Post by Member Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:00 pm

The history is too short...
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Post by FellmoonX Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:04 pm

To short, I've already increased the length by 2/3's of what it was?
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Post by Member Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:08 pm

2/3.... you need 3/3. So add another.
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Post by FellmoonX Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:43 pm

Updated History, hopefully it's long enough. Fellmoon wishes to join Thunderclan, has come a long way. Icon_smile
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Post by LEN KAGAMINE Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:05 am

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