Raventail//Elder//ThunderClan
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Raventail//Elder//ThunderClan
Name: Raventail
Gender: She-Cat
Affiliate: [Clan, Loner, Rogue] Clan, ThunderClan
Rank: Cat- Elder
Wolf-
Looks:
Raventail is a dark tortoiseshell cat, decorated with splotches of black, reddish orange, and dark brown. She has various scars on her body, most noticeably the scar on her shoulder, which stops at her front left paw. She also has only one ear, the other was torn off in a brutal fight with an intruding rogue. Her eyes are dull green, naturally, because of her age.
Personality:
Raventail is a wary, hostile cat, because of her near-death encounter with deathberries. However, she loves kits immensly, and would rather spend her day telling wonderful tales to kits than pigging out on her favorite food- young squirrel. Raventail hisses and spits at anycat who steps into the elder's den, but as soon as she hears the familiar voice, she calms down considerably and welcomes them with open paws. Raventail loves to look at the clan, and daydream of the good ol' times, before Twolegs came and ruined the forest. She loves climbing, despite her age, and loves nothing more than a good rabbit chase. Her age is quite young for an elder, a strapping 45 moons. She's not as playful or energetic as a fifteen moon warrior, but she is proud of her 35 moons of service, however, she is less then pleased with her four moons of rest, after a battle with a rogue.
Birth:
Clanborn
How many other characters you have:
Two
History:
'My kithood, my kithood. My mother was Cherryfur, a wonderful warrior, but I recall, she died after kitting. It saddened my father, Stoneheart, but I never knew my mother, so I did not get why Father was so pained. I remember being bullied by my sisters, Rosekit, and Ptarmigankit, and one of my brothers, Wrenkit. They would tease me and my best friend, my brother Firekit. They would make us miserable. But then, they three arrogant kits went out and got in a fight with a strappling young fox. Rosekit died when the fox pierced her throad. Wrenkit was picked up and thrown in the air. He fell, and went into shock. Ptarmigankit's stomach was torn open. Ptarmigankit died before they could get her medication. Wrenkit made it until Leafbare, when he died, still recovering.' Raventail says quietly, her heart still aching. 'Father was heartbroken, yet again, and drowned himself in the river. We were taken in by a kind queen, who I remember as Tulipheart. She was an old queen, and died just after we were six moons old.'
'The wonderful feeling of pride, as my name is called out, and the crowd of cheering cats greet my ears. My eyes twinkled in glee, and I could barely contain myself, as I saw my wonderful brother Firepaw meow my name out happily, and I look down at the camp from on top of the stone, and I leap down, making my way to Firepaw. It was one of the happiest days in my whole long life.' Raventail proclaims, and smiles. 'I was appointed to Hawkear, a strict and unfair cat. He tormented me, and my poor brother would watch me stumble into the den, exhausted, covered with wounds. I eventually told our leader, not Whitestar, but another, and Hawkear was exiled. We found his body torn apart by ravens, probably died of starvation. I was paired up with Firepaw's mentor, a kind yet strict cat named Pineheart. We had a wonderful time, and before we knew it, Warriorship had come.'
'It was even better than my apprenticeship. The leader called out my name, Raventail, out proudly and gracefully. Firepaw became Firehawk. I became Raventail. We did our warrior duties. One day, I was out, with five shrews in my mouth. I dropped them in the freshkill pile, and made my way to the river. Suddenly, a black and white cat sprang at my face, and clawed my eyes and nose. My eyes bled, and I yowled in pain. Firehawk came to my rescue, and we battled the rogue, but we didn't defeat him before he tore my left ear off. I screamed in pain, but forced myself to help my brother fight off the beast. I had to spend two moons in the warriors den, recovering.' Raventail recalls, wincing at the memory. 'Me and Firehawk spend another twenty five moons helping, before Firehawk succumbed to greencough, and died. I was heartbroken, and I was depressed for two entire moons. I was so depressed, they had me in the warriors den for two moons, trying to overcome my depression. I did, and here I am, tellin' my life story to you young kits!'
RP Sample:
Third bio
ooc-
If I tell stories, can I roleplay some cats, like Firehawk, in Raventail's stories, but the cats are all deceased.
Gender: She-Cat
Affiliate: [Clan, Loner, Rogue] Clan, ThunderClan
Rank: Cat- Elder
Looks:
Raventail is a dark tortoiseshell cat, decorated with splotches of black, reddish orange, and dark brown. She has various scars on her body, most noticeably the scar on her shoulder, which stops at her front left paw. She also has only one ear, the other was torn off in a brutal fight with an intruding rogue. Her eyes are dull green, naturally, because of her age.
Personality:
Raventail is a wary, hostile cat, because of her near-death encounter with deathberries. However, she loves kits immensly, and would rather spend her day telling wonderful tales to kits than pigging out on her favorite food- young squirrel. Raventail hisses and spits at anycat who steps into the elder's den, but as soon as she hears the familiar voice, she calms down considerably and welcomes them with open paws. Raventail loves to look at the clan, and daydream of the good ol' times, before Twolegs came and ruined the forest. She loves climbing, despite her age, and loves nothing more than a good rabbit chase. Her age is quite young for an elder, a strapping 45 moons. She's not as playful or energetic as a fifteen moon warrior, but she is proud of her 35 moons of service, however, she is less then pleased with her four moons of rest, after a battle with a rogue.
Birth:
Clanborn
How many other characters you have:
Two
History:
'My kithood, my kithood. My mother was Cherryfur, a wonderful warrior, but I recall, she died after kitting. It saddened my father, Stoneheart, but I never knew my mother, so I did not get why Father was so pained. I remember being bullied by my sisters, Rosekit, and Ptarmigankit, and one of my brothers, Wrenkit. They would tease me and my best friend, my brother Firekit. They would make us miserable. But then, they three arrogant kits went out and got in a fight with a strappling young fox. Rosekit died when the fox pierced her throad. Wrenkit was picked up and thrown in the air. He fell, and went into shock. Ptarmigankit's stomach was torn open. Ptarmigankit died before they could get her medication. Wrenkit made it until Leafbare, when he died, still recovering.' Raventail says quietly, her heart still aching. 'Father was heartbroken, yet again, and drowned himself in the river. We were taken in by a kind queen, who I remember as Tulipheart. She was an old queen, and died just after we were six moons old.'
'The wonderful feeling of pride, as my name is called out, and the crowd of cheering cats greet my ears. My eyes twinkled in glee, and I could barely contain myself, as I saw my wonderful brother Firepaw meow my name out happily, and I look down at the camp from on top of the stone, and I leap down, making my way to Firepaw. It was one of the happiest days in my whole long life.' Raventail proclaims, and smiles. 'I was appointed to Hawkear, a strict and unfair cat. He tormented me, and my poor brother would watch me stumble into the den, exhausted, covered with wounds. I eventually told our leader, not Whitestar, but another, and Hawkear was exiled. We found his body torn apart by ravens, probably died of starvation. I was paired up with Firepaw's mentor, a kind yet strict cat named Pineheart. We had a wonderful time, and before we knew it, Warriorship had come.'
'It was even better than my apprenticeship. The leader called out my name, Raventail, out proudly and gracefully. Firepaw became Firehawk. I became Raventail. We did our warrior duties. One day, I was out, with five shrews in my mouth. I dropped them in the freshkill pile, and made my way to the river. Suddenly, a black and white cat sprang at my face, and clawed my eyes and nose. My eyes bled, and I yowled in pain. Firehawk came to my rescue, and we battled the rogue, but we didn't defeat him before he tore my left ear off. I screamed in pain, but forced myself to help my brother fight off the beast. I had to spend two moons in the warriors den, recovering.' Raventail recalls, wincing at the memory. 'Me and Firehawk spend another twenty five moons helping, before Firehawk succumbed to greencough, and died. I was heartbroken, and I was depressed for two entire moons. I was so depressed, they had me in the warriors den for two moons, trying to overcome my depression. I did, and here I am, tellin' my life story to you young kits!'
RP Sample:
Third bio
ooc-
If I tell stories, can I roleplay some cats, like Firehawk, in Raventail's stories, but the cats are all deceased.
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Re: Raventail//Elder//ThunderClan
O.o... Umm... Put the Clan that she is in in Affliliate...
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oh, sorry, I stil need to get used to this template xp
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How about the stories?
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I'm not a mod but, since you made them up and they're dead you can control them anyway you want.
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Oh, thanks! <3
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lol nice flint! XD
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