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Dawnpaw//ThunderClan

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Post by De Awesome Raven Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:07 am

Name: Dawnkit

Gender: She-cat

Affiliate: [Clan, Loner, Rogue] Clan

Rank: Cat- Kit

Wolf-

Looks: Dawnkit is a bright, orange cat with short, thick fur and faint brown tabby stripes. Her eyes are an emerald green, and her pelt is soft and thick, with kitten down still on. Dawnkit, being only two and a half moons old, is still growing, but is roughly half the size of her mother. She boasts a strong, but beautiful build, and scars on her shoulder, side and underbelly from a dangerous call with a fox. She had a section of her tail removed after the fox left it cut, bitten, and untreatable.

Personality: Dawnkit is a bubbly, friendly kitten that is extremely sweet, but sometimes too nosy for her own good. She likes listening to elders tell stories, especially legends of the first clans, TigerClan, LionClan and LeopardClan. Dawnkit is a knowledgeable kitten, and knows many facts, considering her age. She likes reciting stories to her friends, to are too 'mature' to be seen in the elders' den. Dawnkit likes to race around the ThunderClan camp, and is one of the fastest kits in ThunderClan, though she can't be sure. Dawnkit is friendly to all, even badgers or rogues. She's too sweet for her own good, but her mother's convinced she'll grow out of it after a close call with a fox.

Birth: Clanborn

History: Dawnkit was born with a sister named Pinekit. Pinekit was one of the most beautiful kits in the nursery-she had a pale gray pelt, with darker gray stripes, and bold, beautiful blue eyes, but was as stubborn as a mule. She and Pinekit were born in New-Leaf, when the leaves had just begun to grow, and flowers began to blossom. Dawnkit and Pinekit weren't the best of friends, in fact, they were the exact opposite. They despised each other. Then, one day, Pinekit just ran off, near the riverside, and found a green, thick liquid and drank it. She immediately fell, sick, and died two days later. Dawnkit was embraced in a cloud of grief. She hid herself in a corner, moping, crying, thinking of all the times she insulted Pinekit, and wailed apologies to Pinekit, for all the times she'd insulted her, for all the times they squabbled or bickered... then, at the worst possible moment, Pinekit's father had to mosey along and get himself killed by a dog. Dawnkit had enough, and let herself get to close to a fox, thinking it was the only way to be with Pinekit and Redclaw, her father. The fox had nearly torn her apart, but patrols found her and chased the fox off. Dawnkit was punished severely, but everyone was understanding. Dawnkit still thinks of her father and sister immensly, but has a new shine to her, as if the spirits of Pinekit and Redclaw were in her blood.

RP Sample:
"Redclaw is dead." Clawheart, one of cats from the patrol, announced solemnly as he stepped in, his eyes filled with grief. Clawheart was accompanied by Flamefang, a new warrior. Flamefang's bright orange coat shone in the sunlight, and Clawheart's pale gray pelt shone dully.
"Redclaw?" Bluetail, Dawnkit's mother, cried as two cats came in with Redclaw's mangled body. Redclaw's rusty red fur was covered with dried blood, and his eyes, though lifeless, still had a glint of desperation and pain as he slowly slipped from life. The body did nothing. Bluetail's eyes started to water. "Redclaw!"
Father? Mother? Dawnkit thought, as Bluetail's mournful cry filled her ears. She ran outside, and was shocked by what she saw.
Her father's dead, torn up body, blood everywhere on his fur, and cuts, bite marks and scratches were all scattered around her father's body, and there was a huge piece of flesh, torn out, by the dog, revealing flesh and bones. Her father's eyes were what scared Dawnkit the most. His eyes were dull and lifeless, but she could see the pain he was feeling, how desperate he was to get out of the fight, and how terrified he was from the first second.
Dawnkit wailed miserably, and hot tears sprang into her eyes. Bluetail had wrapped her tail around Dawnkit, but the kit still sobbed uncontrollably, for Redclaw, for Pinekit, for all that went wrong in her life. Dawnkit ran away, sobbing, wailing, and rammed herself into the wall of the nursery, causing her to cry even louder. Her scared, lonely sobs were heard from all over the camp, and all went to comfort the crying kit, but no one could calm her down.
When the moon was high in the sky, Dawnkit had stopped crying, and she made her way to the center of the camp. She gazed at the moon sadly, but a smile plastered on her face.
She thought of her father, his laughing face, and Pinekit, her wonderful yet horrible personality, and how they would be reunited, destined to romp the grasses of StarClan for eternity. They'd be happy together, just like Dawnkit was happy here.
I wish I could join you, Pinekit, Father, but my time has not come. I'll join you one day, though, don't fret. We'll be reunited on day.
And Dawnkit swore, she could hear the tiny voice of Pinekit, and the deep, rumbing laugh of her father, whisper back,
We know, Dawnkit, we know...
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Post by ϟ ɅȻԐ ϟ Fri Aug 07, 2009 10:24 am

You only need the RP sample for your first bio. APPROVED
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