ShadowClan Apprentice: Griffonpaw (redo)

[Goldenstorm]

Name: Griffonpaw(night)

Gender: Tom

Rank: Apprentice

Clan: ShadowClan

History: His father was kicked out of the Clan and died. His mother was never part of the Clans. The first prey Griffonpaw was ever able to take down was a fat dying rabbit that couldn't run too fast. He is not the most talented hunter, but excells at fighting.

Personality: Griffonpaw is a very ignorant cat. He decided since he was bigger than any of his rivals, he was better than any other apprentice. Griffonpaw is a young cat, maybe he'll change.

Looks: Brown tabby with white underbelly, chest, muzzle, etc. black spots cover the brown topside of his pelt.

rp sample: I already have tons of bios, check one of those out.

[Member]

This one isn't a Bobcat, right? And your history isn't long enough...

[ϟ ɅȻԐ ϟ]

That's a bobcat. I can tell cuz I've had to study 'em...

[Member]

I know it's a Bobcat, Flinty. >>

I'm asking if he's playing Griffinpaw as a Bobcat.

[Goldenstorm]

no, griffonpaw will be a regular cat. just big.

is he good?

[LEN KAGAMINE]

You need a LONGER History... >>

[Goldenstorm]

can't think of anything else to put...

[Member]

... The History is long enough. Besides, there's nothing else to put here. And.. the original bio was better, so we have to look at that one too, right?


So I say APPROVED

[Goldenstorm]

if u want. I kinda redid it so that I could stay away from the bobcat situation.

[Member]

No, it's fine, go RP or something.

[Goldenstorm]

thanks u!

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