Fireclaw of DarkClan

[Naruto]

Name:Fireclaw
Gender:She-cat
Affiliate:DarkClan
Rank:Warrior

Looks:Fireclaw is a dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes. She has a white tipped tail and white muzzle,very faint tabby stripes. Very long,black claws.
Personality:She is fiesty and generally short tempered,but patient and willing to learn. She has a wise demeanor and an outgoing persona. She is ready to die for her Clan.
Birth:Rouge

History:Since she is thirteen moons old,she doesn't have much history. But here it goes. Fireclaw was born a rouge,and left at the entrance of DarkClan's camp as a quarter-moon old kit. She was raised by a random queen and grew up to be a fine warrior.

[LEN KAGAMINE]

What's with you people and Fragments in your Bios?

And, it's::

She is a fiesty and generally short tempered, but patient and willing to learn. She has a wise demeanor and an outgoing persona. She is ready to die for her Clan.

Firepaw is a dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes. She has a white tipped tail and a white muzzle, with very faint tabby stripes. She has very long, black claws.

Since she is six moons old, she doesn't have much history. But here it goes. She was born a rouge and left at the entrance of DarkClan's camp as a quarter-moon old kit. She was raised by a queen and grew up to be a fine apprentice.

You really need to describe more, and have longer sentences, but that's just me.... >>

And, by Demeanor, do you mean:

1. conduct; behavior; deportment.

2. facial appearance; mien?

Though... It was in Personality... So... Im guessing one... xD

[Naruto]

Yes,one. I will fix the other stuff.

[LEN KAGAMINE]

*points to misspelling*

Personality

[Naruto]

Persona is a word. Look it up. That is what I put.

[LEN KAGAMINE]

Outgoing Mask? That doesn't make sence... >>

per·so·na (pr-sn)
n.
1. pl. per·so·nas or per·so·nae (-n) A voice or character representing the speaker in a literary work.
2. personae The characters in a dramatic or literary work.
3. pl. personas The role that one assumes or displays in public or society; one's public image or personality, as distinguished from the inner self.
[Latin persona; see person.]

persona [pɜːˈsəʊnə]
n pl -nae [-niː]
1. (Literary & Literary Critical Terms) (often plural) a character in a play, novel, etc.
2. an assumed identity or character
3. (Psychology) (in Jungian psychology) the mechanism that conceals a person's true thoughts and feelings, esp in his adaptation to the outside world
[Latin: mask]



Wah? xxDDDD

[Naruto]

Like personality. An outgoing mask describes it well. It's like,the personality you wear. Like,when your scared,your face looks scared. XD

[LEN KAGAMINE]

...

Ok...

Then I wear a Blank Persona...

On the Site, and in real life...

xD

[Naruto]

xD

Is she accepted or not?

[ϟ ɅȻԐ ϟ]

She is a fiesty

That's incorrect. There should be no 'a'.

And Kyu, it's spelled SENSE, not sence. SILLY.

[Naruto]

LOL. I didn't put an a.

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