Oceanpaw Shadowclan

[Ocean]

Name: Oceanpaw
Gender: female
Age: 6 moons
Affiliate: Clan
Rank: apprentice

Looks: Oceanpaw has deep beautiful blue eyes. She has long fluffy grey/blue fur with vary light brown rings around her tail.
Personality: Oceanpaw has a vary outspoken personality, she loves to go on adventures and she likes to talks a lot. She hates to do what she is told but she will do it with only a little grumbling. Her favorite thing to do is to joke around with her friends. Oceanpaw has a small problem with talking to old cat because she is scared of them, from an experience she had.
Birth: loner

History: Oceanpaws original name was blue, one day when she was about 4 moons old Oceanpaw wandered off into Shadowclan. A patrol caught her almost right away, but to there surprise she wasn't afraid of them. so they disided to take her to there leader. The leader was skeptical at first but he eventually came around and let her stay as a kit and now an apprentice.

RP Sample: The crescent moon was high in the sky, Blue felt her paws tremble as she approched the dark pine forest. She looked around, suddenly wishing that her mother was standing beside her. Blue swallowed the bile that was rising in her throat, the thought of going into the forest scared most cats she knew. But Blue wanted to know why every cat was so afraid of it. A strong wave of cat scent blew across Blue's nose. She looked around wildly trying to detect the location it was coming from. A large black she-cat jumped down from a tall pine tree, and knocked her down with a swipe of a large forepaw. With a large heave Blue got back up on her small kitten paws. She looked at the black she-cat as she spat out "What are you doing in Shadowclans territory?" She let out annoyed hiss. Blue stared wide eyed at the cat, she had no idea of what to say. Blue could sense the annoyance coming off the she-cat. Suddenly Blue realized that she would not be leaving the forest unharmed so she unsheathed her claws and charged toward the much larger cat, with no fear. Clearly the large cat had no idea that the small kitten would attack her because Blue knocked the she-cat off her paws. At that moment Blue felt the courage of a thousand lions, and she knew she was destined for greatness.

[Riber~]

*happy glee hug*
A newbie that read the rules?

*squees*
Accceppptteeeddd!

[Member]

O.O Maybe there's a blue moon?

[Ace]

Didn't that RP sample come straight from the books?

[Member]

Well, I didn't read it since River said it was approved, so...

Yeah, it is.

Unapproved.

You're supposed to have an RP Sample of your cat anyways.

[Riber~]

Oh, really?
*shrugs* I don't remember any book RPing in Oakheart's point of view.

[Cheesles]

I think she might be RPing how she thought Oakheart musta felt before that big battle.

[Naruto]

Still needs to be about her character. Not one of Erin Hunter's.

[Member]

She didn't make a book in his point of view, but she did write a paragraph or two.

[Ace]

It was in Bluestar's Prophecy or something...

[Member]

Mhm...

[Amberstorm]

*yawns* Relax, people. There's no way this came from the books. I have a friend who owns this book, and I have it here, right now, and I have searched through it and found no such paragraph. "He saw there eyes looking threw the thick under growth. and with a flick of his ear the battle had began." See? Check that out. Never has Erin Hunter put the story in Oakheart's POV. And... I have noticed that no one's ever pinned the rule of having to rp your own character anywhere... Yea... even though I was removed from the high ranks, I'll never loose my admin-ness.

[Member]

Then if it wasn't from Bluestar's Prophecy then it was from one of those..... Guide thingamawhatevers because I know I've read it before. I remember everything I read...

And Flint likes to be technical on things that aren't actually written on the Bio Thingamawhatzit.



But I honestly couldn't care...

[Ocean]

gosh people!!!! i just made it up on the spot. you people are being rediculous!!!!!! i am very disappointed in you for lying. it has never ever ever ever!! *just to make my self clear* ever been written in one of erin hunters books. look it up.

[Ace]

It's to much alike. Just write a different RP sample. It doesn't have to be about your cat, but it should be.

[Amberstorm]

Too much like... a snippet of the story that was never written? Just sayin'. Just when did they write the book in Oakheart's POV?

[Cheesles]

Amber's right, although it probably would be fair if she/he did another one incase.

[Ace]

In the prologues, the stories are written in a different POV.

Anyway, it's now approved.

[Ocean]

dude why is i not approved

[Ace]

Oh my god. What did I JUST post?

Locked.

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