Honeh's Art

[Bumblebee~*]

Alright, here's my first shot at drawing warriors (my first REAL attempt -_-) on MS Paint.

I'm reading Bluestar's Prophecy, and I'm almost finished... so I decided I would draw her.

In this picture, she's supposed to be worrying about Oakheart and her future with him. The largest star represents Moonflower, while the slightly smaller one is Snowfur.

Feel free to critique.



Sorry... I think the quality kind of died along with it... =P

[.:Jaywing:.]

Nice!

[Bumblebee~*]

Thanks. I did it in like... 5 - 10 minutes... I wasn't sure what else to do with it. XD

[kiwiattack]

:-D I loved Bluestar's Prophecy, it's my favorite of all the Warriors books.

Okay, you asked for critique, so here I go:

The only thing I really notice is the anatomy. It's really good for your first time, but there are still several problems. The head is a bit too big for the body, and the shoulder seems to be fused with the chest. There are other wonky bits too. Too learn better animal anatomy, I suggest looking at tutorials (there are several on DeviantART that could help). There are also some really good books out there. One of my favorites is How to Draw Animals by Jack Hamm. One thing I WOULD NOT recommend though is looking at any books or tutorials that just teach you to draw an animal in a certain pose. The best way to learn anatomy is to learn what's under the skin.

Cool job on the eye btw. :3

[Bumblebee~*]

Yeah, I've been having a bit of trouble with that. I draw manga people on paper alot, and I guess I'm used to having the head a bit larger than proportions allow (Did that make sense?). I only just started reading and drawing warrior cats, but thanks for the tips, I'll keep an eye out for good tutorials. =]

Thanks! I don't think the whites of her eyes are supposed to show though... XD

[kiwiattack]

Yeah, they usually don't on most animals. I always let the whites show though.

[Swiftfire the nz Pac-man]

It looks AWESOME!!!

[Bumblebee~*]

Thanks! Any suggestions? ^w^

[Member]

Don'ty give the cats hair styles. It's really stupid looking...

[kiwiattack]

Don'ty give the cats hair styles. It's really stupid looking...

I SUPPORT THIS MESSAGE.

[Bumblebee~*]

Yeah, you told me that on the chatbox, Mem. And Kiwi, I already gave my reason for the "stupid hairstyle". I wasn't going to have it in the first place but it looks even stupider without it.

[Swiftfire the nz Pac-man]

Good point =D

[Bumblebee~*]

Another thing Kiwi, you told me you were fine with it and that lots of talented artists use it. You just think they look like "emo bangs". So what's up with the backtracking? This is just my opinion, but I don't mind it. Lots of the traits we draw on them don't exist. Please don't hate on that part, I'm asking for tips on how to improve, not for flaming on a "stupid hairstyle". =]

[Member]

Oh, I know I did, I just wasn't sure if you saw it or not. XD

I think what Kiwi is saying that a lot of talented artists put bangs on their cats, but she's not fond of it, and thinks they're emo bangs.

[Wolvine]

xD It depends what jur doin. Its fun if your doing a comic and put hair on them to add to humanish things..

[Bumblebee~*]

I know what she's saying. And she's said it already, but now she's acting like she genuinely hates them.

Yehh. X3

[kiwiattack]

I know what she's saying. And she's said it already, but now she's acting like she genuinely hates them.

Yehh. X3

I don't hate them, I just don't like them, at all. I think they look dumb, but I'm fine with some artists using them, I just think that it makes their pictures look worse.

I'm not attacking you, I understand what you said about thinking the forehead looked too big. Also, the degree of the 'hair' on your picture wasn't too bad. It was little, it was not 'emo bangs' as I so affectionately call them. X3

[Bumblebee~*]

... but if I draw Joykit she has to have emo bangs. Cuz she's emo. ;D

[kiwiattack]

Well then that makes sense. :-D

[Bumblebee~*]

Warriors art shouldn't make sense. XP Unless you're drawing for a bio like Kiwiifruitehh.

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